Fighting Life

Fighting Life

A Poem by Marie



We are picked up
like bruised apples
when we fall from
The Tree of Life
and
tossed into
the refuse bin
of
reality
Nobody cares
enough
to
want to know
why
we fell
We try to climb

out
Some are
successful at
Ignoring the
bashing dealt
to
them
We do our best
to
get back into
the
mainstream of
humanity again
Everything
seems well
in
our world
once more

but
the injuries are
internal
and
only our spirits
know

© 2024 Marie


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Gee
Brings to mind the homeless, the more than visible but invisible problem blighting so many towns and cities. A problem largely ignored as to solve would take money and resources that those governing us do not wish part with.
Thought provoking piece Marie.
Hope all is well in the land of Guinness:))

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing your thought provoking, astute words, dear Gee.
Thank you also for kin.. read more



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very nice peace so calm spiritual

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and for your kind comment, Robert...
robert harris jr

4 Months Ago

much love ROBERT
All apples before they fall from the tree are wholesome, fresh and innocent, all recieve a little bruising when the hit terra-firma but the good apples deal with any imperfections using them advantageously, however, even one bad apple when lumped together can spoil the whole barrell/bin, moral of the tale, make the best of one's situation and choose company wisely ..

A marvellous, metaphoric masterpiece Marie, you've put me in the mood for apple-cider later this afternoon!

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Marie

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Oh, you always make me laugh, dear Tom and I am indebted to you for that and hope you enjoy apple-ci.. read more
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Gee
Brings to mind the homeless, the more than visible but invisible problem blighting so many towns and cities. A problem largely ignored as to solve would take money and resources that those governing us do not wish part with.
Thought provoking piece Marie.
Hope all is well in the land of Guinness:))

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing your thought provoking, astute words, dear Gee.
Thank you also for kin.. read more
I completely agree and feel this poem. Beautifully written.

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading, Ken and for your very kind comment. Bless you always...
how often do we get a perfect writing
at times all fall short of grace
We are picked up
like bruised apples
when we fall from
The Tree of Life
and
tossed into
the refuse bin
of
reality
those lines pleases my heart so much

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Hello Tumi. Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment on my poem. I am so pleased you enj.. read more
I wonder if the apple Eve bit into was bruised...
And how much was her internal world bruised?
I like this.
j.

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Marie

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Thank you for reading and for your very enigmatic comment, J. Impossible to know the answer, but I .. read more
Excellent philosophical work. Really enjoyed reading 👍

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment, dear T. P... So pleased you enjoyed reading. B.. read more
Truly the saga of life - Fighting for Life - " Nobody cares enough to want to know why we fell " Such a passionate cry and so we carry internally the burden of knowing - But there is one who sees and knows and cares and has the ability to speak peace to our spirit - at least that is my belief. This is a very powerful and thought provoking piece - glad I came by - carl

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and for your very encouraging comment, Carl. I agree totally with your point o.. read more
Marie,
Have you ever seen the movie "What the Bleep do We Know? It is a truly enlightening view into the world of quantum physics. The second half, or so, addresses the kind of issues you raise here...
Vol

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Hello Vol and thank you for kindly taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I have read a lit.. read more
So true. You write this with wisdom and compassion.

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Marie

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and kindly commenting, Thomas...

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