A Long Night In Winter

Stars shine like silver

through the glass window pane

Lemon moon smiles down.

Reviews

[red93]

I like this, and you have subtly varied the trad 5-7-5 format, where so many start their journey. One wonders about the observer of this quintessential nighttime scene. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Marie]

Thank you for kindly reading and commenting on this Haiku, dear red93. So pleased you enjoyed reading...

[Alira]

Short and sweet. Despite how few words are present in this poem, you can see the image so clearly, and it brings a feeling of safety and familiarity, watching the night from inside one’s home.

[Marie]

Thank you so v-e-r-y much for reading and for your very kind comment, Alira. You have captured exactly what the poem is about. Thank you so v-e-r-y much, Alira...

[willweb]

Another beautiful and quiet little piece of writing. The night skies I always find very mesmerizing.

[Marie]

Hello dear Willweb and thank you for kindly commenting on my little Haiku. Yes, I agree, the night sky is absolutely magical. Wishing you a very nice evening to enjoy, dear poet...