Becoming one with he...

As many of us have I wonder what our purpose is. I say we are here for completion of self. To get closer to he who is everything... That is my meaning to life. So I try to inspire.

All religion put aside, self salvation we aspire…

 

One life for sure we know,

after this will we continue to grow?

I believe long ago angels were men,

but this is now and that was then.

To reach his side we must learn phases,

completion not easy walking in mazes.

 

For the plan is to know and grow,

become rhythm with his flow.

Why can I not see him? Many say…

His many miracles are on display everyday.

He’s all around let us not pretend.

The air we breathe is his magical blend.

 

So what do I believe is my goal in life?

To get closer to he who is all and right.

How do I go about this you say?

Find within your heart the right path to display.

Inspire all in a positive light.

As for me I aim to stay lyrically tight.

-Sansee

 

Reviews

[Chelle]

It takes a caring a keen eye to spot out the displays of miracle and magic. Your description of this internal question that is inside of many is simply potent. In a quick swifts of perfect rhythm , you able yourself to address a defining wonder that for some reason in mounted in our minds and not easily circulated to words such as yours.
Your questioning revealed in a flow , and in the end you know.
Great job !

[ANNA]

Light my heart, It was beautiful.......Flowed with grace.

Rhymed, truth....I loved the part where you said.
Why can I not see him? Many say�
His many miracles are on display everyday.
He's all around let us not pretend.
The air we breathe is his magical blend.

WOW
Much love n respect,
Anna

[Kaotic Barbie]

This was very very good! You rhymed perfectly. :-)