Did the trip ever end?

In my early 20's I experimented with my mind... My view of the world was forever altered.

I took a chance with my mind. I decided to play with one of God’s grand designs.

Answers I was hoping to find, all images became morphing signs.

With my fingers the stars I would move and wined and through time my mind would make lines.

 

Like a child running through the streets, by the ocean I would finally take a seat.

From my body I could feel great heat and my heart created radical beats.

 

I felt like a God playing in a World never seen. It was new and colorful and very clean.

While in thought many answers came in between. I felt at times as if a machine.

What could it all possibly mean? My visual mind was extremely keen.

 

Eventually time came for it to be over, but I would continue to look over my shoulder.

While at work I noticed false people were colder. This situation made me feel older.

 

All became complicated movement around me, through so many people I would see.

A mental equation was the key, all related to numbers it would be.

An ocean of knowledge became my sea. I succeeded through all phases with no fee.

 

A day later still mind spinning, I could not figure if it all was just beginning.

At a distance I heard the phone ring. To sleep I went not knowing what it would bring.

 

Did it ever end? Let me not pretend. My mind will forever bend and I will forever lend.

To this day I cannot fully understand how I stand in a land of moving sand.

So I realize I land in time, like a grain of sand on sand I climb... I refuse to be left behind.

Moving on I learned to find. 

-Sansee 12/31/12

Reviews

[darkgurl]

I felt like a God playing in a World never seen. It was new and colorful and very clean.
While in thought many answers came in between. I felt at times as if a machine.
What could it all possibly mean? My visual mind was extremely keen.

Yeah! BUt when God came to earth he had plans for the earth and how he wanted it to be it is us humans that had corrupted it. Wonderful write Like it, kind of inspirational and touching as well.....Kim

[Legion]

I think this would be pretty good at a poetry slam. Some of the rhymes are still a bit coerced, but your concept is pretty cool here. Would like to see you do something like this without the rhyme perhaps or, at least, develop some stronger rhyme schemes. I like the "God playing in a World never seen" part the best. That was very dramatic and an excellent visual. Kudos.