I hope I rise and analyze.

I originally wrote this many years ago, it has been changed several times.

 

I hope to amaze and make others gaze.

I hope they gaze deep into my mental maze.

I hope my maze is visible through life’s haze.

 

I rise to self reflect the past that most reject.

I rise to not neglect all knowledge that must be set.

I rise to inject my deep mental dialect.

 

I analyze to learn so that I may better earn.

I analyze to take a turn in the cipher, while we burn.

I analyze my eyes to stabilize while I rise.

 

I analyze so that one day I could rise.

I rise so that one day I may stabilize.

I hope to stabilize so that the wise will open their eyes.

 

And while opening their eyes, they will better recognize our ties. 

 

Reflection becomes my confession, it guides me...

Author's Note

Please be honest, as I am a student of life looking to learn.

Reviews

[Amanda]

I analyze so that one day I could rise.
I rise so that one day I may stabilize.
I hope to stabilize so that the wise will open their eyes.

And while opening their eyes they will better
recognize our ties, and clear us from all lies.

very strong and thought provoking here, San...we all need to look inside ourselves from time to time, how else do we grow into what we want to become?

a really good write here...thanks for sharing it :)

A xox

[C.L. Chandler]

awesome! i saw that you were one of the top winners for inspirational poem, so i had to check it out. definitely inspiring... and i like the rhyme and rhythm scheme. very artistic. :)

[darkgurl]

I analyze to learn so that I may better earn.
analyze to take a turn in the cipher while we burn.
I analyze my eyes to stabilize while I rise.

NOw this is awesome! I throughly enjoyed this piece, I like the whole write but these lines stood out....Kim

[Surreal Wolfchild]

i like it, your poem has gotten me thinking, thank you..... by reading your peom it will make people realize how complex and deep you are...you have a wonderful talent, keep it up.

Surreal

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Very well written. I would write more, but I am stuck in read request Hell and working my way out.

Keep up the good work, camper!

-Gabe

[TL Boehm]

I love the flow of this and the repetitive words but most of all I love the message within. So good to read something of yours. its been awhile.

[Joseph - Michael]

Tell you what; It's a really good writing, but just only one problem; There's too much of the "I" to start with

On the other hand, it's still all good, so no worries...