The Cycle

False leaders mind bleeders and blood feeders.

The birth from the balance of negative and positive energy made synergy Godly.

The era of not, begins with a bang. Creation was new to the almighty hand.

The first era was engulfed in fire, all creatures high and low a comet would expire.

The second era lives in myth. Secrets slowly will rise from the mysterious abyss.

The third era was swallowed by the sea. All energy was absorbed tragically.

The fourth era slowly comes to an end. Too much chaos… Let us not pretend.

 

The red star will be rising. And the masses will open up their eyes then

The planets will change, even re-arrange. Life will truly be chaotic and strange.

The earth will shift by Thirty Three degrees. Mankind will then fall to its knees.

The false leaders will run and hide. All then realize we've been hypnotized.

 

The sky in flames will burn the pure and impure… Those surviving must endure.

The souls of many more will be lost, under dark clouds and layers of frost.

The fifth era soon begins. Within “the cycle,” life continues to spin.

 

The gods will once again return with pages of guidance, in hope that we finally learn.

The end of what's known, the beginning of not. Life then lives in the seed of a drop.

 

The end, once again becomes the beginning or rebirth.

 

 2014 -SANZEi

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue, etc.

Reviews

[Midnyte]

So alluring are the words. I love the way the piece is formatted and the differing symbols in the lines. Then again I often read too far into things. I am one who will not pick apart grammar or spelling. I rarely do more than let you see your words through my own thoughts and maybe choose a part of lines that seem to speak to me. With that said, the length was perfect. Too much more would have ruined this, I believe. I think it is the way this can be interpreted keeps me mystified and begs me for a re-read at another time to see what more I can pull away from it. As if you created a riddle, I will ponder this more.

[Aileen]

vrry nice. i like it. i don't beleive that god(s) will not return till we stop killing each other in there name. and if so that the god(s) will distroy us cause they r not happy about what we've become. nice job on this i do like it.
ur friend
Aileen

[Rhine Wolf]

this now the second time that i have heard of 12 2012.

as to the poem very compeling and pleasing to the eye as you read it well structured and worded.

Blessed be,
Fallon

[Tomás Ó C..]

"Ask the Masons, with the eye they see" as one, I can tell you we foretell nothing...

[Tina Kline]

I really like this. Firstly, your poem has a musical rhythmn to it take
makes it a joy to read. And the way you talk about the earth's rise
and coming fall seems right on with alot of stuff I've been hearing.
The poem is very well written and I like the way you talk about the
subject matter that you did. Overall, it is a great poem!

Tina

[Angela]

This is exceptional. I like the mysterious, prophetic aspect and find this piece to be very true and to the point. What a creative thinker you are.

[julian3]

A strong, mystic blend of Revelation, Lovecraft and Whitman.... it could be seen from either of two perspectives, either the hope of new beginnings, or the apocalyptic end of all that is orderly and secure.
You mention your interest in sketching and painting - and somehow, to me, this poem is almost like something you ahve painted... a mix of textures and shades, layers of meaning overlapping. Nicely done.

[Cece]

wat of the numbers
yo mean december 21, 2012
but is tat true


you talk of dreams
you talk of destiny
you talk of Armageddon

dont know about Teleporting
going into the past
going into the future

they said there is no future
they have exact date
of the four horsemen

calendars end
the chinese calendar yin
mayan calendar too

they end at this one date
isnt the mayan calendar
it is around as a wheel

how does one round end
doesnt that continue
so to end this dispute

35"Heaven and earth will pass away"~ Matthew 24:35
is said in the bible
then to have faith

36"No one knows about that day or hour,
not even the angels in heaven, nor the Son,
but only the Father." ~ Matthew 24:36

so no one is to know
so live from day to day
The Day and Hour Unknown

not this date December 21, 2012
thats in the next president's reign
mmm is this to be da antichrist

[Angel Bird]

WOW! This is BRILLIANT! Such POWER going out of it! Strong vibrations I get while reading.
This is an outstanding work! BRAVO!

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

Thank you for the comment... I am re-inspired.