My Girls

A poem I wrote when my beautiful girls were quite young.

Sunshine and laughter

My girls of golden light

Little mermiads in the water

Quiet angels at night

Smiles to die for, blue eyes to match

Riding bikes, building tents, a quick game of catch

Untidy bedrooms, they can't find a thing

Friends here at teatime, a push on the swing

Playing and laughing, rushing around

Coming in excited, a new friend they've found

Loving hugs for me, a kiss and a smile

Miserable without them, I'll just watch for a while

Reviews

[Brie]

This is great! I like your comparisons in the beginning...
"Little mermaids in the water, Quiet angels at night."
Very creative!
-Brie