IF.......

IF.......

A Poem by Freespirit111063
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Thoughts

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If love was the highest mountain on earth, how many of us would climb it?

If hate was the deepest hole in the world, how many of us would fill it?

If harmony was just a beautiful song, how may of us would sing it?

If sacrifice was giving up everything, how many of us would do it?

If being whole meant cutting away part of us, how many of us would cut it?

If living forever meant dying first, how many of us would kill?

If getting everything we wanted in life was easy, how many of us would find it hard?

 

Climb, fill, sing, do, cut, kill, can you??????

© 2008 Freespirit111063


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i had to put my thinking cap on for this one... hahha its hard to put a finger on all the brillant questions you just asked.... a intelligent piece and i really enjoyed it!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


i thought this piece was deep.
i loved all your questions and i wonder if theres some one out there who would and could answer them.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Certainly food for thought here! Very good questions and I think that most readers will know the answers. You're very brave to ask them and to confront the audience with many eternal philosophical issues!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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