deep in dreams

i like this one o: even though its kind of a downer Lol:)

a dark cave is where i lay..

a dark cold cave is where i stay..

this dark and damp cave is my home..

i keep my eyes shut and dream, my dreams..

given up on life and given up on hope..

whats the use of trying?..

whats the use of believing?..

when it clearly wont happen..

when i clearly cant do anything right..

there is no hope..

so i lay in my cave.. all day and night i lay and slumber..

dreaming good dreams.. i drift away in them..

then i notice.. i cant wake up.. reaility is dead..

and so am i...

so now i live in my dreams..

although it seems to be more of a nightmare..

a dark cave is where i lay..

a dark cave is where i stay...

forever...

Reviews

[TyarraRaine]

keep in mind this is just a poem:D

[Lillian]

yikes..WAKE UP!!!!!! lol