ThunderStorm

dont worry, these arent really my emotions:D basically i was being artistic:o (trying lol)

As i lay in bed that night,

you happend to appear in my head,

I thought of the good times then i thought of the bad,

This brought tears to my eyes,

and had made me sad,

Then this brought the guilt and the shame,

but i know there is no one to blame,

i feel as if my emotions for you are like Crashing waves,

In a Thunder Storm,

Up and Down,

and all around,

i dont wanna hear a sound,

No crashes nor flashes of the past,

cause sometimes i feel as if I am going to turn into ashes

Reviews

[lawrence bear]

this is an excellent poem, very well written. a strong piece, full of emotions. well done and welcome to the cafe :)

[Lillian]

Wow! OW..:)) lovely baby