Hold Me

Hold Me

A Poem by Freedomcomes
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For me, this poem is about a woman who misses her past (almost abusive) relationship.

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In the act of forgetting
my lips moaned your name,
and I remembered.

You reward ragged pain with kisses,
lips, like a mother’s, healing.
Suffering happily,
knowing the comfort you can bring.

I miss you like a childhood wound,
and ache for the battle prize –
earning a soothing touch, some time.
I cherish the webbing scars.

The touches of the present
are alien.

It’s not how it should be.
It wasn’t love.
But it was you

and it was good.

© 2009 Freedomcomes


Author's Note

Freedomcomes
Any interpretation is welcome, and I am extremely grateful for constructive criticism.

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Freedomcomes
Freedomcomes

Aberystwyth, Wales



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I'm a fresher at Aberystwyth University reading English Literature and Creative Writing. I like writing both poetry and short stories. They tend to be slightly controversial according to some, and .. more..

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