Relationships…in seventeen syllables

Relationships…in seventeen syllables

A Poem by Freedom Jurnee
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Haiku from my blog http://haikubyjoy.wordpress.com/

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You know I love you

Sometimes I don’t like you though

But that’s just sometimes

© 2012 Freedom Jurnee


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This poem made me chuckle. The way you constructed the simple lines is extremely easy to read, the meaning perfectly clear. Which, to me, makes it a successful communication. This is my 'knee jerk' reaction which is about all you'll get from me because I'm just a simple person (I get knee jerks all the time for various reasons).

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Perfect description of relationships.
-Courage

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you for your review, I really appreciate your feedback!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem made me chuckle. The way you constructed the simple lines is extremely easy to read, the meaning perfectly clear. Which, to me, makes it a successful communication. This is my 'knee jerk' reaction which is about all you'll get from me because I'm just a simple person (I get knee jerks all the time for various reasons).

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 13, 2012
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Freedom Jurnee
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My name is Freedom Jurnee. I am a family woman first. A wife (with a wonderful husband), A mother (with the best children in the world). I am a writer for several blogs, an author of great works you h.. more..

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