I'm okay

Random.....

Everything I've believed

in, smashed into the mud. 

All I've worked toward,

pulverized into dust But

I'm

okay. Who wanted all that,

anyway? Who needed

an unobstructed road to

a tidy little future, when 

really

the fun is in breaking trail

toward some unknown 

destination? Any sane person

would say you should

not

put every shred of hope 

into one human being, especially

not a boy. The prefect boy,

no longer mine. But, hey, I'm 

okay.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The breaks and stops make this interesting and eye catching, like a person questioning themselves.

[Katrina Crago.]

I love these kinds of poems!
Great work.

[Distant horizons]

wise words, wisely told. Glad to hear you're okay :-)

[D E V O N K E S I N G E..]

Nice work.... I like the words down the middle....

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. I liked the format. I could relate to this piece. With the words going down the middle anyway...thanks for sharing.