Love Me, Hate Me, Never Leave Me....

This is a random thing I wrote when I was in math class. Comment if you want.....

I see you walking down the hall

And I get butterflies in my stomach.

We haven't talked in years.

Best friends since sixth grade?

Yeah right....

We always hung out together 

Just the two of us.

We joked around a lot. 

During class, we would

Always get in trouble.

Seventh grade came around and 

He started to change

Drastically. 

We still hung out and 

He started walking me to my classes. 

My heart was racing.

Then, he would hug me 

And go to class. 

Hopefully, he was never late.

Some douchebag decided to 

Be funny and say;

"When's the baby due?"

He ignored me until 

The end of the year

When we went our seperate 

Ways for the summer.

Eighth grade came.

We had one class together.

Gym.

He was so cute in the

Ugly green and yellow shirts.

We didn't talk as much,

But we had inside jokes.

Time went on. I started 

To realize that I was in

Love with him.

He is like gravity. 

The only thing that keeps

Me on the earth. 

Reviews

[Taylor]

Aww that is adorable not kidding it is true when u dont talk to someone for to long they start to change then u realize u were in love until he is gone or your gone truee GOOD JOB. But always remember that whatever happens u know he will be your friend that will always be there and have FAITH that guy will come around sometime though

[Kaitlyn Raiford]

Your pain has a way of seeping through the screen and into other's hearts. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us here.

[Alex Vidmar]

I really like this :) very well written. Three thumbs up!

Peace!

Alex.

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[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is so cute

[Katrina Crago.]

Aww this was so cute, yet it made me slightly depressed :/ oh well, keep it up

[nevermindfan1991]

This poem was good. But It was declarative. It didn't read like a poem to me, more like a statement. But I really loved the last stanza: "He is like gravity.
The only thing that keeps
Me on the earth. " If you have time, review my new poem. Please and thank you!

[Sophie]

I really loved this :) there's just nothing else to say

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww... so cute and sweet! I definately love this poem! Great job! Definately enjoyed reading this piece. =)

[tanaya]

This is a sweet poem XD I love how you set it out as a story XD Great work! And here are your comments XD Do you know how to do the reading requests? I will do it with my contacts if you want! XD

[Krystyna Herst]

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