Big decision

philosophical poem

It was always right there 
mocking me
whispering that only a coward would stay here
when he can simply pass it and be free,
so one day I opened the door to freedom
and promptly without a deafening boom
..........I merely found myself in another room

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Ya, that's how it goes. We limit ourselves and imagine how it could be.

[Neville]

saves on solicitors fees and removal expenses though..... N

[Paul Bell]

I suppose freedom is really one room away.
Though, what freedom is it we want?
Freedom to stay, freedom to go.
Escape into prison, peace.

[Rye]

Very well expressed write, and written. enjoyed this

[Frederika]

thank you ryanna

[Rye]

not a problem