Haiku Chain #7 (09)

Haiku Chain #7 (09)

 

Sunlight splashes souls
Laughter is gift wrapped madness
We are all children

 

Pout at the cold rain
Rejoice with grinning green warmth
Dance the star puddles

 

We are all children
Seasons are our spun playgrounds
Sunlight splashes souls

 

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太陽の光の魂をはね
笑い賜物です狂気ラップ
私たちはすべての子供たちです

ふくれっ面では、冷たい雨
ニヤリと喜ぶ緑の暖かさ
ダンスの星水たまり

私たちはすべての子供たちです
スピンしている私たちの遊び場シーズンズ
太陽の光の魂をはね

Reviews

[Dianah]

'Laughter is gift wrapped madness'. Love that line so much. It should be up there in a book of classic quotes.
This poem made me smile. Off to find my inner wild child (could be gorey!)

[Sam Davidson]

In the words of our beat forefathers; "Yeah! Go!"

Energy, insight and a rippled symmetry which perfectly matches it's subject.

Oh, and before I forget: That's Radical Dude!!! =D