Nancy Sleeps on the Beach

 

In Nancy’s green stare,

Liberty shines

 

On the seashore

Naked

Rum bottle half empty

Smile half full

Starlight bathes

Her curvaceous frame

 

Red curls bounce

As she dances

No music

To be heard

But

The sounds of

Lake Worth Beach

 

For her pleasure:

Earth spins

Waves lap

Moon shines

Birds circle

Sand cradles

Wind blows

 

She knows that

She owns her existence

Just as much as

Her existence

Owns her

 

She giggles a salty anthem

An exquisite moment

World giggles

Along

 

In Nancy’s green stare

Liberty shines

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

I love this piece! I'm glad I read it, too. I came to your profile with the intention to read, and I chose this one because, heck, I'm going to the beach in a week, and I'm a little excited. lol. but This peace in intoxicating. It makes you feel like you're right there beside Nancy, this entity who seems to be so at one with nature that has influence on what happens in it. Very great. I love this.
KH

[James K. Blaylock]

I really enjoyed the whole feel and mood of this piece. This girl is truly a free spirit!

jkb

[Sarah Hawkinson]

That's very interesting! lol almost like she's on drugs but I won't make that leap. She could just be very intune with her existence and her relavence in nature. Nice job!