Little Brother

A poem I wrote about my little brother and how I see him

Take my advice
Reach for the stars
I love you very much
Even though I never show it

Reach for the stars
You're much smarter than this 
I don't know why you can't see it 
When I can

You're much smarter than this
To pretend to be an idiot 
That's not who you really are
I know it

To pretend to be an idiot
It's my job
I try to make you laugh
You just look ashamed 

It's my job
To give you advice
So here it is
Don't give up little brother.

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

The niceness of this poem is hard for my demonic nature to understand.

well written

[Kaitlyn Raiford]

I can feel the love drip from your words and leak right into my own heart.

[ATG]

A very cute and well written. The poems definately makes you think of an older sibling caring about there younger brother. A very good read.

[Leave me alone....]

awwww this is so cute!!! :) makes me think of my little brother~

[Katrina Crago.]

Aww thank you :D
I actually shared this in my writing club and couldn't get through it because I started crying haha.

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Aww this is sweet...:) always good to see a big sis looking out for her lil bro.