With You

Not some of my best work, but they're my emotions.

When I'm with you
I feel as though I'm about to cry
I get too emotional

When I'm with you
I feel like singing
And climbing to the tallest building and screaming out your name

When I'm with you
I feel like laughing
Even though we haven't spoken a word.

When I'm with you
I feel upset
Because you make me feel this way

Whenever I'm with you, I feel all of these at once.
It feels as though I'm going to burst
It's right there and then I realize
I love you.

I've loved you for a long, long time
Just never took the time to notice.

When I'm alone
You're all I think of.

When I'm alone 
You're what I need

When I'm alone
You're my inspiration

But With you.
I know that for certain now
I'm in love.

Reviews

[ATG]

A very good poem. I did like how the first four stanzas had the same first line. That was a nice touch. It added repetition to the poem which made the poem flow better. Overall, it was a great read that really protrays love for someone.