Mackenzie

The description of a loving girl, whose life ended too shortly.

Her eyes an incomparable shade of blue never to be seen again

Her hair golden waves adorning her softly dimpled cheeks

Her smile a sunrise out shinning the cloak of darkness that surrounds this world

Her laughter now a bittersweet melody stick on loop inside my head

Her heart an unpenitrable fortress of gold now laying painfully still

Her love a rain cloud in the midst of a summer's drought

Her mind a gentle dove floating aimlessly in the breeze

Her life a shooting star, so brief, yet so beautiful, so short but offering so much hope,

Her name a daily reminder that we will not live forever,

Her story, a tattoo
across my heart, there to stay forever.

Author's Note

Just know that you are loved ❤

Reviews

[Planet x]

Powerful and touching poetry
Thank you for sharing

[Raj Sahu]

“Her eyes an incomparable shade of blue

Her hair golden waves adorning her soft dimples

Her smile a sunrise out shinning the night

Her laughter now a bittersweet melody

Her heart an unpenitrable fortress of gold."

The description you portrayed here is quite enamoring. You made full use of imagery along with love. Marvellous work! Keep writing.