For Conkles?

Your poems are well penned
Though often they offend
As they mention my close friends
And my strange fashion trends.
That said, I can't pretend
That I do not commend
You skills, nor contend
The way they transcend 
Things others have penned.

Reviews

[Black]

it has something to it..
a real emotion,
though keep on working on it

[£15 + A S**t BJ]

i can feel the realness

[Smokey]

Siddles first sentence was better than your stanza of s**t which you call a poem. Regardless; would you like some drugs?

[BigDaddySiddle]

"as my n*****s will reccomend
to meet your big bellend
as white liquids begin to blend" - would have perfected the poem, good work however!