Open Boat

This poem was inspired by my appreciation for Angeline's poem entitled, "Redemption." I love that poem. I also appreciate Stephen Crane's beautifully written short story...

Waves murmur
Awaken with whispers
Disintegrate dreams
With hollow roars

And I remain
Within an open boat
Only to see a fading shore

Floating with two oars beside me
Choosing to leave them motionless

Reviews

[Kat-Marie Berti]

Very nice poem Frank, makes me think about the choices Ive made in my life and how they affected how things are today, loved it :)

xoxo

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Another beautiful write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah