The Ghost of Chestshire

O bent skies, imbedd'd with wond'r! Where eyes-
Where smiles touch hues! O hopeful- O wisemen wond'r-
Where sorrow lies! In captivity my life once flew!
O time, the wise, the dying- If only man knew!

 

Answer: true freedom

Reviews

[Rain]

Totally different than anything I've read. I read it three times...each time I understood it more. I would like to read more in this style. Good job...bold. Rain..

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"Where sorrow lies! In captivity my life once flew!" -Wow!! This line is simply awesome, It is truly so thoughtful and deep.
I loved the way you have presented in; really you have written it in a very interesting writing style which is so original and creative.
Thanks a lot for sharing it!

[Butterflymom]

Very creative, beautiful, and original. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the great writing!!