Sometimes I cry

Sometimes I cry but shed no tears,
Sometimes I cry because I have no fears,
No fear of life no fear of death,
Will I feel again before my last breath,
Will I feel love so strong and bold,
Or emptiness so strong and cold,
To feel is wonderful or so I'm told,
Sometimes I cry for years and years,
Sometimes I cry but shed no tears

Author's Note

My first poem

Reviews

[Strawberry Evil]

I like it, really much. The words you have chosen are good, they fit the mood. And the rhymes (?) are really good too. I can somehow relate to this, not so sure how... It just makes me feel that I can relate, that I can feel what's behind this. That's a good thing in a poem, to make others feel what you feel. Good job, especially for a first poem! Keep it up!

[Frank James]

Thank you very much I appreciate your compliments. I feel that is the main goal of poetry or any writing at that, to reach someone and I'm glad It can reach you. For me it is about the emotional walls I have built due to past circumstances

[Strawberry Evil]

That is indeed the main point in it for me too :) You are very welcome!