August

August

A Poem by FranciskaS

Lying under the chestnut
cracked strain
Large scattered branches
Reaching for the light
Gold and Silver
Trickles through the leaves
On my cool-seeking skin
Summer

© 2014 FranciskaS


Author's Note

FranciskaS
Just starting..
Be gentle with me ;-)

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Simple, but not dull. I loved the last half of this, I think it really captured the essence of summer, without being unoriginal. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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FranciskaS

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Lexi.

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Added on August 5, 2014
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FranciskaS
FranciskaS

Leeuwarden, Friesland, Netherlands