Perfect Day

Perfect Day

A Story by Francis Orion
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100 word Drabble

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My sun. The day was perfect with a beautiful sunrise with you right from the start. Me and my shadow, out and about the town. We went to Starbucks and had Frappuccinos, while having a nice conversation. We played basketball, you dribbled and shot like me. You followed me around as we did yard work. We even stopped to play a little. Everywhere I was, you trailed happily, excited just to have me near. You mimicking my moves just made me smile all day. Now I lay here cuddled up for the night, with you, my son. I love you.

© 2015 Francis Orion


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Love this! Nothing like having a tiny shadow to curl up with at the end of the day. Being a parent is awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Francis Orion

9 Years Ago

Word! My Lil Ninja is my life!
I like the way you used "my sun" and "my son". Very clever., and a optimistic piece well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Francis Orion

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Superb Francis, a perfect day indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Francis Orion

9 Years Ago

Thank you, it was! :)
Nice! 100 words picture an interesting story. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Francis Orion

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much.

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Added on October 13, 2015
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Francis Orion
Francis Orion

Capital Region , NY



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