Whole

I'm not broken anymore
I'm the person I can be
You make sense of what was broke before
You're my complete
With you
I'm not broken anymore

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

A great place to be Francis, knowing that your worst is behind you and is understood, simply as part of you, the person they care about.we all break, sometimes those who can mend cross our paths and make us appreciate once more.
Great words, saying so much in so few. Nice one my friend.

[Francis Orion]

As always thank you. I appreciate you reading and your kind words, my friend.

[Tinder]

Beautiful piece..keep it up

[Francis Orion]

Thank you :)

[Autumn Lyric]

This is so nice... no longer broken, your half is now made whole, complete. Lovely poem and enjoyed reading it very much...

[Francis Orion]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Zugzwang]

I thought this was a lovely, sweet expression of love and hope. Well done.

[Francis Orion]

Thank you for your kind words

[Kelly Scheppers]

We go through life searching for that connection, the other piece to the puzzle that completes us. It changes everything...our lives as well as our perspective.

It was hard to resist the title and photo...good insight, Francis!

[Francis Orion]

Thank you :)