Intensity

Lips passionately embraced
Two souls together as one
Become blended on your palette
To create one vibrant color of love

Reviews

[SheIsMe]

Very intense, very real and raw, very true. The unique color of love.

[Kitty]

I think the title should be unity. Matches the blending in part :)

[Francis Orion]

I wrote this without a title, and had a hard time picking one. Thanks for the feedback.

[katie]

Short but it flows and paints a quick picture in your mind. I like this!

[Francis Orion]

Thank you, somethings are good just short and sweet. :)

[katie]

I agree! :)

[A. Amos]

Smooth and elegantly crafted..

[Francis Orion]

Thank you very much!