Hang ups

i dont hate you

take me back,
the way it used to be

ill comb my hair!
ill wear my prettiest dress,
i never intened to let you down
IN YOUR MIND

take me back,
just for today

ill buckle my shoes,
just for today,
but tomorow ill me ME again.

but today i'll dance on your feet
youll sing to me
words i cant UnDErStanD

tell me you love me.

take me through the clouds
lead me to the sand
somewhere I've never been

take me back?

ill clean my finger nails just to hold your hand today.

Author's Note

sometimes i was wish i could go back in time. not to fix relationships but to hold on to the good things about one.

Reviews

[Lily1111]

I think this poem speaks well to the feeling of wanting to go back in time, but at the same time recognizes that the person would have to change they way they are to have been accepted. In the end, you are left with the feeling, that the relationship is in the past for a reason. Good write!

[Joseph - Michael]

Yeah, I wish I could go back in time, too...

Anyway, it's hard to read for those who went through the same things, but it's all still good tho...

[October]

This is really beautiful.

Well written.
Thanks for sharing.