This Way Comes - Chapter 3A Chapter by FRAN.KINGWhat will Blue and Noah do when faced with something truly terrifying?Whilst Blue was still staring at the space in between the man’s boots and the floor, Noah was watching the man’s eyes. They were moving slowly over the pair, as if not fully understanding what they were seeing. His eyes grazed over Noah’s face and, without warning, they made eye contact. Noah felt, as he stared into the cold blue eyes of the floating man, as if the man could see right into his head, as if he could read his thoughts. Noah shivered and looked away as the ghost’s eyes moved over to Blue.
Blue, having seen the affect the ghost had on Noah knew she had to act. Although feeling more absolutely terrified than she had in all of her life Blue knew she had to be brave for her Second. She stepped towards the floating man and, with her chin held up importantly, said “Are you a friend or a foe?”
The ghost said nothing in reply. It tilted its head slightly as if sizing Blue and Noah up, and then, very slowly, it smiled the most horrific, most evil smile anyone had ever smiled.
The vile glint in his eye told Blue that this was no friend. This creature had nothing but bad intentions for the adventurers. “You have no business with us, foul beast,” (Blue didn’t have any idea what this meant, but she thought it sounded very impressive) “begone, or I’ll, I’ll…”, Blue wasn’t sure what she’d do. “Or,” tried Noah, “We’ll, we’ll smite you!” “Yes. Or we’ll smite you and then you’ll be sorry” The ghost’s smile faltered, the evil glint leaving his eyes for just a moment. He looked them both over once more, than then without taking his eyes off them, melted back into the darkness.
Breathing a sigh of relief, Blue slid her sword back into her belt. She turned to Noah and said, “What does ‘smite’ mean?” Noah let out a nervous laugh. “I’m not totally sure but think it’s a good thing to say to ghosts.” He thought for a moment “Or it could be a good thing for a ghost to say.” “Well, whatever it means, it seemed to work. It’ll be back though. I think that was just a warning. I think that’s what’s guarding the Something the dandelions point to.” Blue said seriously. “But it’s a good sign.” “How was that a good sign?” “It means we’re getting close” said Blue. And the pair turned, continuing down the dark path together.
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The darkness was, once again, becoming heavier, as if they were walking through a tunnel from day into night. The trees and plants around them became denser, every step felt like a battle against nature, as if the forest itself was protecting the Secret Something. Blue was starting to get impatient, the further in they went, the slower they were moving. Her wellies made it difficult for her to pick her feet out of the tangle of vines at the forest floor, more than once she felt her foot begin to slip out of her boot and had to stand on one foot to pull the welly out without getting her purple stripy socks wet.
The fourth or fifth time this happened Blue gave out an almighty sigh and said to Noah “This is hopeless. We’ll never find the Secret Something at this rate.” Noah looked at her as she hopped grumpily on one leg, then squinted up at the tangle of branches above their heads. “There’s only one thing for it,” he said, as if resigned to the worst thing ever. “we’ll have to climb through the trees” Blue was so surprised at this that she stopped hopping. This was a mistake as she lost her balance and fell flat on her bum in the vines. “You’re not being serious?” she said looking up at him from the floor. “Noah Jefferson, suggesting we climb a tree? I’ve never heard anything so outrageous” Noah looked down at her, his eyebrows knotted together very seriously. “Whatever the Secret Something is, I think we need to find it, and soon, before someone truly awful can get their hands on it” Amazed, but concerned about Noah’s fear of heights, Blue stood up and looked seriously into his eyes. “Are you totally, completely sure you want to do this?” she asked, pulling her welly back on over her now soggy sock. Noah nodded, “It’s the right thing to do”.
Blue spent a few minutes looking around for a nearby tree that Noah would be able to climb. She settled for a particularly lumpy oak.
Noah started trying to climb the tree. Following Blue’s advice, he started by throwing his arms over the branch and then swinging himself up, but he couldn’t figure out how to get up any higher once hanging over the branch. After falling back down a few time Blue suggested a new tactic, throwing his leg up with his arm and pulling himself up, but after a few failed attempts to get his leg onto the lowest branch, Noah started to get annoyed and tried running and jumping at the branch, each time ending up painfully falling on his bum.
Realising this would be harder for him than she had thought, Blue offered to take Noah’s bag off him to make it easier for him because she knew that even though he was wearing trainers, and she was wearing wellies, (trainers are the ideal footwear for climbing trees and Blue would happily explain to anyone who asked exactly why) he found climbing much more difficult than she did and was therefore much less practiced at it. Noah took off his pack and helped Blue fix it over the top of hers, meaning she ended up looking a bit like a turtle.
Even without the weight of the bag Noah still couldn’t manage to pull himself up. Blue decided she had to do what any good leader would do for their Second. “Here,” she said, linking her fingers together to make a cradle with her hands, “I’ll give you a leg up”. With a look of relief, Noah placed his muddy trainer into Blue’s outstretched hands and, with a shove from his best friend, managed to throw himself onto the lowest branch. “Thanks,” he said, grinning, as he swung his leg over the branch, so he was sitting up. Blue smiled and pulled herself up next to him, grinning back. “Anytime”
With Blue’s help, Noah climbed quite high up the tree, finally reaching a branch that stretched over to the neighbouring Elm. He sat, as Blue instructed, with his legs either side of the tree, whilst he waited for Blue to haul herself up next to him. Trying his best not to look down, he glanced along the branch to where it met a branch of the next tree and gulped. “Blue,” he said in a near whisper, “I don’t think I can do this” “Don’t be silly Noah!” She said as she pulled herself up behind him. “You’ll be fine, you’ve done the difficult bit already.” Noah didn’t look convinced. Blue offered to help him climb back down and carry on walking, but Noah was more scared of climbing down than he was climbing from tree to tree.
Noah started shuffling along the branch, holding the branch above for support, and before long he realised the fastest way would just be swinging from branch to branch like a monkey. He’d seen Blue do it before so how hard could it be? Wrapping his arms tightly around the branch, he stood up and walked along it. The further away from the trunk he got, the thinner the branch was, until he felt like he was walking along a tightrope. Once the branch was too thin to walk on, he stopped, judging where the nearest branch would be, and how far he would have to swing to reach it. Taking a few steps backwards, Noah closed his eyes, took a long deep breath, and without warning, ran forwards and jumped, still holding the branch. Mid swing, when he was between both trees, he let go with one hand and grabbed the nearest branch with his other. He pulled himself over and swung himself onto a lower branch.
Having got his balance on the new tree, he looked up at Blue, whose face was white, her eyes wide. Noah smiled up at her, and her face broke into the biggest smile he had ever seen.
“That,” laughed Blue, “was the bravest most impressive thing I have ever seen!” Noah, laughing with her, gave a small bow. “Your turn.” Noah moved up the branch so Blue would have room to land, and then, without a moment’s hesitation, swung easily onto Noah’s branch. Once Blue was balance, Noah moved all the way up the branch and stood up next to the trunk. He wrapped his arms around it and placed his foot on a branch coming from the other side of the trunk. He pulled himself around and stood up on the branch. Shuffling along this branch he found his confidence growing, and relatively soon the pair were making impressive progress, swinging through the trees. Noah noticed that they had somehow climbed a lot higher than they had been on the first branch, as there was much more sunlight getting through to them, making their progress that much easier, but somehow, he didn’t seem to mind the height so much anymore. Although carrying Noah’s backpack as well as her own made Blue feel very unbalanced, Blue knew that only way to stop Noah falling out of the trees was for her to carry his bag for him. After a while she stopped noticing the extra weight because her excitement at how fast they were travelling distracting her.
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In the middle of the forest, Blue and Noah sat, their legs hanging off the branch. “How far do you think we have left to go?” Asked Noah through a mouthful of banana (his mum always packed him something to eat, explorers need fuel). “I’m not sure,” Blue said, peering down at the forest floor, “But I think we might be okay to climb down and carry on by walking” Putting their banana skins into the rucksacks on Blue’s back the pair began the climb back down, feeling nervous. Up in the trees they felt safe, the distance between them and the thing they had met made them feel as if they had the upper hand, but if they were back on the same level they weren’t so sure they would be able to scare it off for a second time. © 2021 FRAN.KING |
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Added on August 14, 2021 Last Updated on August 15, 2021 Tags: children's, adventure, first draft, writer, book, children's adventure AuthorFRAN.KINGUnited KingdomAboutHi, I'm Fran and I'm an aspiring children's author. I've always loved reading and so due to natural progression, I've pretty much always wanted to write. more..Writing
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