`Barefoot Courtisan`

`Barefoot Courtisan`

A Poem by Fran Marie

Geisha girl. Lotus pearll
   zen gardens float on fronds of ferns
          and green peacock feathers
 
blending colors of cherry blossoms and rainbows
   but how does your garden flow?
 
geisha girl, lotus pearl
   bleeding into blue cracked teacups
         empty teardrops tainted in black mascara
 
on white kabuki art drawn masks
    porceline in a garden cannot grow
 
geisha girl, lotus pearl
  locked  up dreams  wrapped too tight
    in dyed kimonos and dainty tea cakes
 
breaking inside fleeting beauty 
    a dying, colorless heart of a barefoot courtisan
 
 

© 2018 Fran Marie


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I've always had a fascination with Geishas and your poem is an absolute work of art-phenomenal read rich with beauty and intrigue. This is going in my favorites because the richness of the words, how you painted the picture is absolutely breathtaking. Glorious poem my dear.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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What I hear in this, Fran, is the eternal tragedy of the woman who subverts her true self, who creates an image that she believes another craves, and the sadness that accompanies that decision. A tragedy not limited to Japanese women, need I add?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Quite a deep and clever write. Very good use of poetic language, and the poem has a nice flow to it. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful imagery.... fine flow of words....nice to read

Posted 13 Years Ago


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abosolutely stunning..captivating words and phrasing..this is divine..and their is something about the geisha's that is intriguing..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I've always had a fascination with Geishas and your poem is an absolute work of art-phenomenal read rich with beauty and intrigue. This is going in my favorites because the richness of the words, how you painted the picture is absolutely breathtaking. Glorious poem my dear.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

a rich banquet of imagery and scents and sounds~ a diorama of beautiful fragility painted with your poetic brush~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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loved your 3rd stanza, this is amazing Fran, Nicely written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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