` Still I See`

~ Still I See~ My love for you grows stronger

My days without you glow dim

Measurement of time~longer

Merriment turns grim   Still I see your face   Staring with fire blue-ice eyes   So I'm staying locked within your love's embrace   Savoring those memories of warm sunnier skies,    

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Short and simple word but very powerful in emotion.

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh you have captured those moments when we want to be with someone we no longer can. The flow is easy to follow and your word choices are great.