Moonlight and Magic

Moonlight and Magic Seduced by his romantic charms
he captured my heart
tripping my senses
keeping me spellbound
yes, I was caught in his song


into his thoughts
tuned to the moment
turned on by his soft sinful kisses
serenaded by magic and moonlight
held in a lover's dream


he promised love
whispered sweet affections
and delivered both
with profound perfection of a sensuous soul
O` yes, I shall not forget his words


absorbing every nuance as he spoke
`It was a good line
guitar in the distance
besides I liked his melodies`
and what matters most;I always will

Reviews

[TaraNicole]

This is a lovely, lovely write..

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much;

[Ovi-Odiete]

Great .
This is Phenomenal...

[Fran Marie]

Thank you so very much;

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely, romantic poem. The way you play out that attraction and leave the reader without regret is lovely.

NOTES: Maybe this line should read, "turned on by his soft sinful [kisses]" Just a suggestion.

[Fran Marie]

thank you so very much;

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. Are you in the Poetry Challenge group?

[Fran Marie]

don't know if I am or not? lol, I entered so many groups cant keep count

[MomzillaNC]

I just checked. No, you are not. Are you interested? I have a couple of spots that opened up recently. The URL is http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/Poetry-Challenge/11410/

Regular (though not obsessive) participation is required. The members who were dropped had never participated at all. I'm trying to keep the group smallish -- limited to 30 members.

[Fran Marie]

oh ok... yes I will join

[MomzillaNC]

I'll send an invite.

[Lyn Anderson]

I am never disappointed when I visit. Well timed romantic write. One minor suggestion, I might put kisses to match the senses in the previous stanza. Just a thought.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks K.L. so much, I agree kisses would work better there..

[Lyn Anderson]

You are so welcome. I love the simplicity and grace with which you present your romantic writing.

[Indian Ink]

wow, great!!

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much;

[SmittyJas]

Beautiful Moonlight Love Story Brought me in all the way. Made me very happy for the couples Love. Magical words used in this loving thriller.

[Fran Marie]

thanks SmittyJas, so very much;

[Samuel Price]

I love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story. Music and love are a dangerous mix. Add some good wine. Trouble may happen? I like the story of music and the birth of desire. Those are the good days in a life. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Magdelena]

Fran what a beaut.. Bravo for so touching and romantic it gave me chills.. Sighhh..

Mags xx