`DarK Embrace`

Dark Embrace Embrace the darkness
lift the opaque veil of night
revealing secrets



of an underworld
glimpse shadowed lands through red eyes
where blood is life's source



when fire winds breathe low
behold evil's existence
walk the lower realms
  where chthonic spirits await you~ dwelling below earth's light in blackness  
Inhale hell's fury
bleeding a bloody moon dry
Live a dark embrace!

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

This is a imaginative piece that studies humanity as a whole.

[Tate Morgan]

Inhale hell's fury
bleeding a bloody moon dry
Live a dark embrace!

I see a true poet heart in you with this piece

[Tom Benson]

Not a favourite genre of mine Fran Marie, but that doesn't mean it isn't well written. If spooky was your intention, it works.

[Linear]

Breathe in the atmosphere, of such a dark embrace, you write so well i've come under your spell

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Children of the night rise and follow the woman in white for she will lead you to the shadows of salvation... very interesting work... so much mystery and intrigue in the images you provoke.

[Doug Ordunio]

Very good! This may be the first time I have seen the word "chthonic" used in verse. Most will have no idea of its meaning, so you'll have people duiving for their dictionaries. Interesting...

Nice addition. ;)

[MuSe Ampoule]

Ooh, very good! I love it. The last stanza was the best for me! :)

Lol it appears you preemptively wrote about tonight's WOTD.

[Sean M. Addams]

very dark and liked the imagery in this alot ..overall a very eerie piece .. creepily creative ..great job on this...