`LoVe ROcKs`
A Poem by Fran Marie
Senryu
`LoVe ROcKs`
Love Rocks! that's no lie when you wrap me in your tune it's always a high
Love Rocks! it's groovin' you have me reelin' Baby! feels good and moves me
Love Rocks! passion stirs my desire to ignite a fire smokin' hot!
Love Rocks! smooth glidin' no hiden' my inner lust! kiss me Babe! Love Rocks!
© 2010 Fran Marie
Author's Note
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Takin' a walk on the lightside for a change
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Reviews
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Such an awesome write Fran, Love this. Love the pic as well.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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I do believe that love rocks, and this senryu song just made love dance in a dream. It was good to take a walk down the lighter side!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I love the picture that you have going on with you...great use of syntax "love rocks! it's groovin" gotta love it...
Posted 14 Years Ago
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this poem rocks..fun and kewl..
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Love this, it's very fun and cheerful.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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I love this rhythm. Love truly does rock.
Even when those 'love' rocks are pelting
you up side your heart. :))
B/W
Posted 14 Years Ago
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This is really good. Great job writing this (:
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Great writing, my friend .. and fun too, good to know the spirits are happy in your world!
These words would make a great foot-tapping lyrics - and don't doubt you could find a musician somewhere in the Cafe!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Know what else rocks? This senryu! ;)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 22, 2010
Last Updated on October 22, 2010
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