`BLooD`

A Haiku Poem Collaboration by Fran Marie and Sean M. Addams

                                     

 

Blood! Drip~Drip~Dripping

in the dark damp air, don't! don't!

she screams as he stabs

 

with a cold steel blade

she gasps for breath still choking

her face and throat slashed!

 

BODY STIFFENS DRAINED

of life BLEEDING IN HIS HANDS

KNIFE GLEAMING BRIGHT RED

 

HE DRINKS THE Cool BLOOD

UPON HIS DEVILISH LIPS

BLOOD! DRIP-DRIP-DRIPPING!

Author's Note

Thanks again my dark friend for touching pens with me on this one ~

I love our joined efforts and think this turned out to be a bloody good collaboration!

Reviews

[Mike]

an interesting read, i enjoyed it.

[Breanna Ragland]

i love it!!!

[Tina Kline]

Brutal and violent. This is an excellent collaboration.

[Sean M. Addams]

i think this turned out bloody good ... a very chilling piece... thanks for asking me to collabrate with you on this ... I think we did an awesome job... our words bleed together well!!