Sweeney Todd

Sweeney Todd

A Poem by Fran Marie
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A Haiku Collaborartion Poem by Fran Marie and Sean. M. Addams

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                                   Sweeney Todd
 

 
Revenge bitter sweet
waking ghost of dead demons
my razor brings death

Cutting slick their throats
blood sprays as they hang,bodies
made into meat pies


Yum,yum eat them up
two bits for shave and hair cut
no refunds on meals


Ms lovett helps me
murder and she must die too
for me Sweeney Todd

© 2010 Fran Marie


Author's Note

  Fran Marie
Thanks Sean for blending inks again on yet another dark poem

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How I love Sweeney Todd. Lovely haiku!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yum,yum eat them up
two bits for shave and hair cut
no refunds on meals

What a dark man he was! I am off off to the London Dungeons today where he will be!
Great write about a very disturbed man. Well done to you and Sean.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

love it! my favorite so far.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love Sweeny Todd. I think this is awesome!! Good job both of you. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this turned out great ... this is one of my favorite haikus we have done together the font and the imagery makes this a real creepy haiku ... thanks for collabrating with me again...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 17, 2010
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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