The Writing Is On The Wall

for Poppy's Image Born Contest

The writing is on the wall read it,heed it How?   we can't see it! A Gray Antique wall of Mason's stone lined in pure gold On the wall's facade truth lies at the top believe it! still we can't scale it The wall's height reaches high places hidden faces This wall's breadth a pyramid illusion weeds plucked at the bottom The wall's depth a secret burial ground centuries old The writing is on the wall peons exit stage left Survival of the Elitist NOW WE GET IT!

Reviews

[LadyAnn68]

Fantastic...I will ave this one to library. Bravo. Scaling the wall....wow..

[Ruth]

EXCELLENT Fran, love!
Couldn't have said it better! lol
I LOVE this!
Hard hitting as it needs to be
Wonderful
xx

[Sean M. Addams]

i like this alot well expressed and rather powerful..overall You did a impressive job on this!!

[Crowley]

Nice job...great fit for the image. You write like the wind....lol.

[Poetic Beauty]

The poem expressing how we tend to think there are walls that we can not over come or we choose to ignore warning when we should listen. this was written well with a great lesson to think about.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You speak volumes here... how many times do we see but never understand always hoping there is more than meets the eye. Now I get it.

[Robin]

what do they mean taking ? our planet is controlled from behind closed doors and golf courses

[ChristianM]

What I like about your poems is you have to go over it two or three times to fully understand it.
Your definitely my kind of poet.
A voice I can relate to.

[deeps]

This is amazing I like this alot. Says so much.