Hungry Eyes~DBL Etheree

 

Each
letter
spelling out
line formation
defining verses
tumbling into the next
stanza of thoughts, creations
delete mistakes complete process
crumpled papers trashed, rewrite, edit
perfecting poems for your hungry eyes

*~*

Hungry eyes which devour each line and verse
then reading over again,grasping,
absorbing, ambiance in tone
savoring the sweet essence
of poetry's manna
tripping the senses
tunning the soul
imparting
sated
Love

Reviews

[Pete]

wow. you really pulled out all the creative stops. so cool how you flip the writing process to the reading process along with all that each entails and conjures up. can never go wrong with love. very different and tres enjoyable. well done ... :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Pete
for your insightful
review..you picked
up the process of
what I was
conveying with
this particular
form..

[Davidgeo]

This is what one would objectively call style.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for
reading dave;
yes; structure
poems seem to
have a style form
all their own;

[~~~~~]

Beautifully penned. Poignant and reflective of a skilled hand. You have selected the perfect words to maximize the effect of the form. I like both but the second is my most favourite.

[deeps]

First off, I love the form used it's beuatiful
Secondly, This is wonderful and very lovely worded.
Overall, I like this alot. I am impressed.