~ROSE~Sestina~

Morning dew kisses summer's rose so sweet as the golden sun greets a brand new day love bestowed upon me is such a joy 'tis such a love which fills my lonely heart in return, I'll give twice as much to you knowing well, I'd be lost without your love You're everything to me and more dear love so loving, gentle, kind and sweet for sun shines naught, but for you and you brighten for me the dullest day your love is my life's flow, unto my heart with your sweetest smile of joy Sure as summer's warm rose brings joy tis only you, for which I live and love forever my love, you shall have my heart I'll softly caress you, with kisses my sweet and when raindrops fall, I'll warm your day sharing my dear love with only you My ethereal essence belongs to you as my spirit fades into yours, tis joy we're soul mates of past, future and today two bonded souls synchronized in love and like summer's rose petals fold sweet my love is a rose, i give, we are of one heart Your love is passion, burning in my heart my only desire is loving you and like the reddest rose blooms sweet bringing into my heart a special joy you are my only one true love forever each and every day Rain or shine cold or warm the day dear, eternal flames burns within my heart I cannot deny 'tis you who holds my love 'til the day I die, it will always be you my lithe spirit sings softly with joy because I have your love so sweet Happy the thought of another day with you doth make my heart beat for joy like summer's scented rose, our love is sweet.

Reviews

[Devons]

Though this is a dedicated poem of love, it has an intensity which separates from comparison with any normal gushing verses of affection..
The classical way in which this love is portrayed and compared is pseudo-Shakespearean in nature and the form and technique add to this effect.
My prejudice for this kind of romantic positivity was suspended whilst reading these lines because of the skillful way that they were conveyed. They have an ancient, charm-like fantasy about them which lends the piece a depth which most poems of its kidney cannot hope to and seldom do attain.

[barleygirl]

This is a classically well-crafted love poem that seems to reflect the tones of old-timey romance (which seems rather "general" to me, but it's a widely-celebrated style). I'm way too jaded in life (about love) to really delve into a poem in this style, so I'll just appreciate your careful graceful word crafting & not dampen the lovely mood you've spun with my cynicism! *wink! wink!* There are a hell of alot more people who would enjoy your style of poem here, than most of mine that may be more gritty & specific about love! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Margie I appreciate you telling it like it is..I like your style of writing...so many good writers on this site with their own style..it's all good..I always appreciate your reviews on my poetry

[Neville]

This poem of yours shared here is truly beautiful & in every respect.... respect my very fine literary friend and true...

Neville

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much for reading Neville.i..so appreciate

[Neville]

twas lovely and my pleasure entirely ... Neville :)

[emmajoy]

Written a while ago but ever holding that classical elegance you write so beautifully. Sitting here, early morning, wishing there was so much more love like this around our world. Those last three lines say it all.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks emmajoy.. i so appreciate your kind words😀

[emmajoy]

Your post is not only passionate but finely written.. an example to those still learning how to.. ..

[Fran Marie]

Thank you once sgain Emma for your thoughtful comments on my poetry.. this was a most trying and difficult form (for me) to write .. one i would not attempt again..lol

[emmajoy]

You say that now... :)

[mattavelli]

This is impressive, Fran. Each stanza is lovely on its own, but together they are powerful, like the wave train of a tsunami from an ocean of love. Some of the repetitious poetic forms turn me off, but this one is subtle and pleasant to read. And what you've done with it is beautiful. :)

[Fran Marie]

many thanks, Matt, for reading and reviewing glad you enjoyed;

[TheFemininePad]

A very nice light and uplifting poem about the intensity of true love. This was very well written, and I can tell that you put some quality time into your writing. Your very talented at conveying your emotions through the text inside your poem. I don't see where I would improve this poem. I think its great as it is.

[Sean M. Addams]

simply beautiful ... you do have a way with words ..great job on this one

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful!!!

[Wicahpi]

This is such a romantic Sestina!
You've made this form come alive with feeling.
Much luck in the contest!!

[An owl on the moon]

This is a beautifully vivid write, filled with expressions of true and lasting love! A celebration of all that makes a heart race with the joy of the sweetest days...