Moonlight Shadows

 

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Moonlight shadows sneak across a velvet sky
  as midnight catches me watching and wondering why
it seems to override my days as well
  these sinister shadows sent from hell
 
Haunting my dreams since whence I was born
  this dreadful darkness won't leave me alone
 trying to reach stars shinning bright
  searching a new moon of hope and light
 
Yet moonlight shadows always stay
  each new dawn and breaking day
 I cannot break this damning curse
  neverending evil at its deadly work
 
Demons and angels fight for my soul
   and I fear the demons are gaining control.
 
 
 
 

Reviews

[Kayla]

That was AWESOME!!! My favorite piece of work that you've written!! I could picture everything in my mind, vividly!! It sends chills down my spine!! And it is so true because everyone has their inner wars everyday. When we decide to do this or that. Doctors have decide whose lives to save. So many hard choices that we ourselves must make. Anyways, my favorite part of you poem was the last part "Demons and angels fight for my soul and I fear the demons are gaining control." That was just un-freaken-believable!! Congrats on one of the most amazing writes I have ever read!!

[Shellie]

That was brilliant missus. The pic you put with it was perfect. I actually cant pick what lines are my fave i love the whole piece.

[Poeticpiers]

How very true moonlight and shadows combine to deceive We are all part angel part Demon we can only try to maintain the balance

I think you have a typo whence surely should be when?

[Ladysue]

This is awesome indeed. It flowed smoothly. This is exactly how it can be. You described this battle within flawlessly. Perfect imagery! Very powerful and profound. A phenomenal write.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Beautiful, sultry, dark and just a little scary...you mix a concoction intoxicating to the senses here Fran. Great job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yowza Fran that was bone chilling and those last to lines really brought it all together... it sems we all face personal Armageddon everyday with conflicted emotions battling one another and trying to figure out right from wrong. I too feel as if the demons are gaining sometimes... wonderfully expressed my friend.

[deeps]

Fran, This is so amazing here. I really like this write alot.
Such a wonderful and remarkable write.