Angels~have we heard?

Christmas

 

 
Angels play softly a heavenly song
for tonight a new great king is born
sing praise and glory unto him
he is  salvation for all men
 
Angels weep at man's worldly sin
because they forgotten the new born king
they only care about their own gain
and the fastest way they can win
 
Angels shout aloud the woe and pain
this world must now endure
where wise men once adored His name
fools have thrown Him to the floor
 
Angels frown in sad remorse
 sorry to see what modern man has wrought
of moral decay we weaved the course
We tossed our king away and honor him naught
 
Angels pray that men see the light
tho~ fear it may be too late
but not for the Newborn King; whom inspite
of men's wicked ways,forgives and waits
 
 
 
 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the new twist you have added to the Birth of Jesus. You are right. There are many people in my generation that don't believe anymore. I believe we need to seek Him in order to make our lives full filled and to have peace. Your poem flows well and it has a beauty about it even with it describing a sad twist in the world.

[MagiCrystal]

Angels are all over us... so they can fight the countless battles are can't win.
Love it.. love it amor

[An owl on the moon]

Your message is so powerfully profound and moving. What was meant to bring peace and hope has been too often neglected... And yet.. the hope remains for He still waits with arms wide open. May the season awaken us to the message again.. Thank you, Fran!

[Sean M. Addams]

like the message in this alot a very beautiful and deep piece perfect for the christmas season... overall i thought you did a great job on this... a very meaningful write.

[Tina Kline]

A very very beautiful poem. Full of pain yet so full of hope, because He forgives and waits.
Very impressive work. Love this a lot.

[Katrina Mckeown]

A beautifully constructed poem....Thank-you for sharing!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Thats is quite a message you have delivered and just in time for so many have forgotten the reason for Christmas... your words are very insightful and wise.

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful and beuatiful poem here. This is very well written and straight to the point of what christmas means! Well stated Fran!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of hope and sadness. I agree we need more remembering the birth of Christ then shopping for presents. Photo made words come alive. Thank you for this wonderful poem.
Coyote