Dreamland Fantasy

 

I saunter through a dreamland fantasy
 in steamy waters of ecstacy
      my heartbeat quickens
        my pulse races
          In an amber moon your face I see
 
          
 
A sudden rush of pleasure enchants me
   as a soft night breeze gently flows
      palm trees sway
        a free spirit plays
            In a midnight dream you call to me
 
 
 
Shades of white mixes into desire
   as a red-hot flame inside me glows
    for I am woman
       I need no reason
              for my lust and love to show
 
 
 
I inhale the scent of your flesh
     as I undress you from head to toe
         for you are man
           you need not understand
               for this fantasy to grow
 
 
 
I sense the beauty in all its charm
  I'm entranced by a wondrous dream
    come wrap yourself around me
       I'll savor your every touch
               loverman of my dreamland fantasy
     
     

       

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Lol...I have been reading you for so long, Fran, that I knew it was your voice even before I saw the author's name. How cool is that? The night, the moon all contribute to the theme of fantasy. It is beautifully laid out with just enough romance, lust and intrigue. Kudos!

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much, Brie, lol, that is too cool indeed;

[HorrorMaster]

I so want to go to this dreamland fantasy. It was amazing read.

[BelowABridge]

Sesual but not trashy. I really liked it. The colors were nicely used "amber", "white", "red-hot flame", the imagery was very dreamlike with "steamy" and "soft night breeze", and I like the bringing up of man and woman in the 3rd and 4th stanzas. Those were my favorite parts.

[Helen Crutchett]

Truly a great poetic love write Fran! Loved it!!
We all have our 'loverman of dreamland fantasy!!!

Helena ;)

[there is no more from m..]

this was such an amazing poem well done

[Kelley]

This was amazing Fran!!! I love how it flowed and
How so many could rellate. Thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[Erotic Goddess]

A sudden rush of pleasure enchants me
as a soft night breeze gently flows
palm trees sway
a free spirit plays
In a midnight dream you call to me

Delicious madness, at its best and written so well. Thank you. I really enjoyed the soft flow of your words in this writing.

xxoxx

xxoxx

[Eric Cox]

Very passionate. Created well. Great job!

[Hello, Goodbye]

this is fantastic. the visuals are splendid

[Heather Rodwell]

This is starvingly beautiful! I say starvingly, because, I'm starving for more. Oh it makes mew itch to read on and on. It creates such enchanting images in my mind. I feel lost in the moment, the pause of time to remind us of how we all crave for that magical sensual moment of utter passion and desire.