`Equilibrium`

 

 

 

 

 

You!

Throw me off
ballance, losing
all sense of equilibrium.
I tremble and lose control.
Yet, this unshakable faith I
have, confirms our love was
meant to be.

You!

Turn me on, completely
Im in a dazed
so dizzy,it renders me
senseless,and captive
of your loving power.


You!

Make me crumble like
a fragile cookie.
gingerly snapped~into
sugary love-bites,
I become your's, all your's.


You!

taste my desire
my hunger for your love
I chase you 'til you catch me
free falling, willingly into your arms


'Tonight you are mine,

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Deliciously seductive and sensual! What a fantastic stanza this is.....

Make me crumble like
a fragile cookie.
gingerly snapped~into
sugary love-bites,

Brava! Lydi**

[Fran Marie]

thanks, Lydi, I kinda like that stanza also.. so appreciate you stopping by..

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
I love the fluency and sweet sentiment:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, James..glad you enjoyed

[~]

Ahh, what amazing skill you have to leave your reader breathless dear friend! Absolutely gorgeous!! :D

[Fran Marie]

Thanks. Moonskittles so. Very much..

[Matching Socks]

Totally good love vibes!
I like it!

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks , Ana...

[PearlPoet]

Clapping Loud!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Bravo~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Im so glad that I stumbled upon your poem tonight.... Simply Brilliant and it leaves this reader hungered for MORE... ~smiles~

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Pearl Poet, so vey much appriciate..

[SM Davis]

Wow! Steamy! You never cease to amaze me with your ability to place words in a perfect pattern. Well done Fran!!

[Brianna Brie]

You!

Make me crumble like
a fragile cookie.
gingerly snapped~into
sugary love-bites,
I become your's, all your's.

I am getting that all around good feeling inside from this poem. It is fabulous!

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

I love the way you play around with the readers imagination, never being too specific and leaving margin for imagination. Very well done, all i can say is Amazing!

[Sean M. Addams]

like the sensual playful tone of this.... some of the imagery kind of makes me hungry... overall a very passionate write... very cute!!!

[Magdelena]

You!!! Did a fantastic job with this! I so loved the images. The sizzling passion of desire, love that filled your words.. Oh my, I am in awe.. Fab job here me gal...


Mag xxx