A Darker Love

Gothic Love

 

 

 

A darker love such as I've never known

  'tis the deepest part of me you own

you drink me in with gothic eyes

  into a midnight magic I can't deny

 

 

I cling to your every caress

   my darkest love you now possess

to darker realms of love that wait

   I'll walk with you thru~ hell's evil gate

 

 

Man nor beast shall come between

  this dark burning passion the world so deemed

A love with strength such as this

  secures the bond tighter with each dark kiss

 

 

A darker love is what you found in me

   and by the gods of hell you'll not go free

your chains are bound, I have the key

   yes, a darker love I've found in thee

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

ilike the dark tone of this piece... a very chilling write.... liked the imagery in this alot overall nice job on this.... fav lines...Man nor beast shall come between

this dark burning passion the world so deemed

A love with strength such as this..... nice work!!!

secures the bond tighter with each dark kiss

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Gosh Fran..bravo..elegant...dark...delicious...your rhyme and meter exquisite and sooooo nice to see love with a twist!

[The Analog Kid]

Very nice flow and rhyme. Passive tone about a sort of restraint. Smoothly dark like the chocolate...

[megalOmaniac]

darkly sensual..i love the last paragraph and thee control and will it portrays.

[November_Rain]

very moving, awesome job!

[Star Wolf]

Very nice and romantically dark, being a prisoner of love.

[Vera Iconica]

Very very dark. I like it! My favorite lines are A darker love is what you found in me

and by the gods of hell you'll not go free

your chains are bound, I have the key

yes, a darker love I've found in thee
Absolutley brilliant.

[Fanciful Goddess]

Beautiful ..very nice!!! love the words..

[Kal]

Nice writing..

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, I love this piece. A fabulous dark write with wonderful imagery. Awesome write!!!

Heather

[ShadowHaze]

Yayyyy! I love this one. SOO going on my fav's list. So true, and SOOOOO me. Thank you very much for writing this. And this is a kickass poem here. Totally awesome :)

Keep writing!!!!

--Haze