A Darker Love

A Darker Love

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Gothic Love

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A darker love such as I've never known

  'tis the deepest part of me you own

you drink me in with gothic eyes

  into a midnight magic I can't deny

 

 

I cling to your every caress

   my darkest love you now possess

to darker realms of love that wait

   I'll walk with you thru~ hell's evil gate

 

 

Man nor beast shall come between

  this dark burning passion the world so deemed

A love with strength such as this

  secures the bond tighter with each dark kiss

 

 

A darker love is what you found in me

   and by the gods of hell you'll not go free

your chains are bound, I have the key

   yes, a darker love I've found in thee

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Fran Marie


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ilike the dark tone of this piece... a very chilling write.... liked the imagery in this alot overall nice job on this.... fav lines...Man nor beast shall come between

this dark burning passion the world so deemed

A love with strength such as this..... nice work!!!

secures the bond tighter with each dark kiss


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Gosh Fran..bravo..elegant...dark...delicious...your rhyme and meter exquisite and sooooo nice to see love with a twist!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice flow and rhyme. Passive tone about a sort of restraint. Smoothly dark like the chocolate...

Posted 14 Years Ago


darkly sensual..i love the last paragraph and thee control and will it portrays.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very moving, awesome job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice and romantically dark, being a prisoner of love.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very very dark. I like it! My favorite lines are A darker love is what you found in me

and by the gods of hell you'll not go free

your chains are bound, I have the key

yes, a darker love I've found in thee
Absolutley brilliant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Beautiful ..very nice!!! love the words..

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Nice writing..

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Wow, I love this piece. A fabulous dark write with wonderful imagery. Awesome write!!!

Heather

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Yayyyy! I love this one. SOO going on my fav's list. So true, and SOOOOO me. Thank you very much for writing this. And this is a kickass poem here. Totally awesome :)

Keep writing!!!!

--Haze

Posted 15 Years Ago


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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