Mobius

 

Theres no beginning
 
    never an end as it seems
 
                   a mobius course

 
 
along the surface
 
  which I transverse passing thru~
 
           this continued path

 
 
infinity's sync
 
   repeating karma's journey
 
                  for all I survey

 
 
drawn to the edge of
 
   sane simplicity,only 
           
              to return once more
 
 
 
 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

This is one of my favorites from you so far. The balance of your lines is sharp, and their measure is sharper still. This piece has a good deal of spirit within it that stretches out against the walls of reality and tests the boundaries. This is good art.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A wonderful string of haikus that captures the mystery of endless space and time.

[Shadow Writer]

Very crafty wrte. Enjoyed. Phantom............

[Sheila Kline]

Any write that speaks of infinity especially captures my attention, as I view the possiblity of it so mesmerizing!
Your words indeed draw me to the edge and back again!
Wonderful thoughts!!

[deeps]

I love this Fran
Amazing haiku's here.
Well expressed