Mobius

Mobius

A Poem by Fran Marie

 



Theres no beginning
 
    never an end as it seems
 
                   a mobius course


 
 
along the surface
 
  which I transverse passing thru~
 
           this continued path


 
 
infinity's sync
 
   repeating karma's journey
 
                  for all I survey


 
 
drawn to the edge of
 
   sane simplicity,only 
           
              to return once more
 
 
 
 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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This is one of my favorites from you so far. The balance of your lines is sharp, and their measure is sharper still. This piece has a good deal of spirit within it that stretches out against the walls of reality and tests the boundaries. This is good art.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This poem is so capturing of the thought of life going around and around in circles. It inspires me, so well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

Thanks Carla, so much for reading ..I'm glad you liked it..
A very creative and impressive poem. The unending journey.....a trap or something to be desired.


Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem was very well written, it flowed well and had in my opinion several hard hitting stanzas great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully worded and filled with metaphorical imagery, it truly sings to me.
very nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the concept and your depiction is so concise with each word so well selected. I wish you would read one similar poem of mine titled "Double Helix"

Posted 14 Years Ago


The haiku flow together create a powerful poem. I believe in the word Karma. What we do in a life will come back to us in the good or the bad deeds. Life is a simple movement. We are here to create life and take care of each other. I like this poem. Made me think. Your words always awake my tire mind. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is one of my favorites from you so far. The balance of your lines is sharp, and their measure is sharper still. This piece has a good deal of spirit within it that stretches out against the walls of reality and tests the boundaries. This is good art.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

There was something about the metered infinity of this piece that I just loved- and that's really all I can say. It just simply works.. and for that alone, it left an impression on me.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this piece is amazing ... i think this is the best haiku piece i've read in a long time... nice job on this..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice one Fran, it's got the same movement as the picture you chose which reminds me of what a system of highways might look like if they were never ever torn down but layered over and over, over hunderds of years.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 17, 2009
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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