^ Vampyre ^

 

His face grows pale
 
this demon of night
 
fangs biting with breath stale
 
grotesque sardonic grin
 
dagger eyes of death
 
pierce to impale

Reviews

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

congrats on the win:) Your vampire write-ups are really what they are supposed to be... GOTHIC!!!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jerald..much appriciated

[Sean M. Addams]

very cool piece like the detail in this alot.... very haunting and pretty dark but thats what i love about your writes... nice job!!!

[Georgia Gypsy]

I seriously have chill bumps from reading this one!
You and i need to talk this weekend! I just love vampire's! We need to compare notes..LOL!

[Tina Kline]

That's a very dark, scary and haunting vampire poem!
It makes the vampire in the poem more of an evil one,
not one you'd want to meet!

[Helena]

Shudder! Chilling and haunting. Brilliant! ~ Helena

[angelina neves]

brrrrrrrrrr :) Lovely!

[deeps]

Wow! Love it Fran,
This is awesome.
You sure can write those dark writes
And I enjoy them all.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Wonderful! It follows the rules, provides imagery, and moves smoothly.