Sanguine Moon

haiku

 

The moon by night shines
 
             a mysterious dark glow
 
                                and so I follow

 
 
a familiar path
 
     beckons to me,knowing well
 
                     a dark sanguine moon

 
 
slowly grows dimmer
 
     in sinister shadows of night
 
                     beyond the oak tree

awaits destiny
 
     angel or demon which drives
 
                this force? perhaps me. 
 
 
 
 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Haunt me, I say fran marie, you capture the pinnacle moon, with glorious skill and stately craft,
a thirst for knowledge set under a shadow, walking a well beaten path, passing under a cool autumn moon,
to drift away like the leaves falling from the oak tree you so beautifull inscript into the background,
to continue to walk the bittersweet journey is to fade into september, beckoned by magic's
whisper the reader can't help but fall into the dream, the mysterious force floating upon ethereal
air currents of knowing the sanguine moon's voice and heeding to its call. expressed through brilliance~

[*** Hey Jude***]

Ah, the sanguine moon; first full moon after the harvest moon. I this was a wonderful metaphor you used to convey these enticing thoughts. This is a skillfully written Haiku that is flawless in sharing your thoughts and dreams. Well done! ~ Jude :-) xo

[Gheeneil]

The sanguine moon is like a dream which entices us and so we start to move closer to it for realization. Yet, there are so many things which influence us along the way. We could get lost depending on our responses. I always believe there are two contradictory forces within us. They are debating in us wishing to be in command. If something felt different, it could be that the other force took over and we let it be in control.

A creative piece.

[Sheila Kline]

The thought of a sanguine moon intrigues me...how creative and well composed!
And, the picture you have chosen for the write is absolutely perfect!
Great job Fran Marie!