Sanguine Moon

haiku

 

The moon by night shines
 
             a mysterious dark glow
 
                                and so I follow

 
 
a familiar path
 
     beckons to me,knowing well
 
                     a dark sanguine moon

 
 
slowly grows dimmer
 
     in sinister shadows of night
 
                     beyond the oak tree

awaits destiny
 
     angel or demon which drives
 
                this force? perhaps me. 
 
 
 
 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Haunt me, I say fran marie, you capture the pinnacle moon, with glorious skill and stately craft,
a thirst for knowledge set under a shadow, walking a well beaten path, passing under a cool autumn moon,
to drift away like the leaves falling from the oak tree you so beautifull inscript into the background,
to continue to walk the bittersweet journey is to fade into september, beckoned by magic's
whisper the reader can't help but fall into the dream, the mysterious force floating upon ethereal
air currents of knowing the sanguine moon's voice and heeding to its call. expressed through brilliance~

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect ending to the amazing poetry dear Fran. Sometimes we are the demon and we don't know it. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

s o true ..John so true
thanks for your words on my poetry..I so appreciate;

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran and I appreciate the comment.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Fran Marie, your posted image is a feast for the eyes, and your lines are a perfect match. Wonderful imagery and thought provoking too. Quite a haunting read. What lies beyond the oak indeed. All good wishes.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

October greetings my friend..Thanks for stopping by to read..I so appreciate.☺

[TAO]

Oh...wow, wow, wow... Now, this is a beautiful work of art, indeed... There was a feeling that I've missed for a long time, reading this work... It was unhibited and abject wonderment, like when first I learned that I absolutely enjoyed reading... Well done.

[Marie Harrison]

Beautiful poem. Lovely.

Wow, this has been tucked away for a long time, huh? I'm so glad I inspired it to come out of hiding. Beautiful. I knew this was a good word. ;)

[Sean M. Addams]

very beautiful piece and very well done nice job on this...

[CommonHeartCure]

Utterly beautiful!It's captivating and original!

[Shadow Writer]

Simply beautiful. Phantom..........

[deeps]

Love it Fran, This is one amazing write here.
You do have a very poetic pen.
I admire your talent and your way with words.

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a familiar path

beckons to me,knowing well

a dark sanguine moon
god..i love this..you write like no body else i ever read...a mysterious sanguine moon..beautiful write..